miércoles, 24 de octubre de 2012
Thanksgiving Day
In 1620, the pilgrims salied from England and the crossed the Atlantic Ocean. As a result the travel lasted 66 days.
During the travel, two passengers died, as well as also a baby was born, the name of baby was Oceanus.
Then, the Pilgrims arrived in North America. By the way, the Pilgrims started a New Town Playmouth.
The natives helped the Pilgrims grow crops and the harvest was great.Finally, the natives and the Pilgrims celebbrated with a big feast.
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Hi Alin. Very good work, just check out the following mistakes and CORRECT THEM please ;) :
ResponderEliminar1. As a result, the travel... (The comma)
2. ...two passengers died. ALSO, a baby boy was born. The name of THE
baby was... (punctuation, grammar and vocabulary)
3. The pilgrims started a new town, Plymouth. (punctuation, spelling)
4. ...the natives and the pilgrims CELEBRATED... (spelling)