In 1620, the Pilgrims sailed from England. Later, the trip lasted 66 days and the Pilgrims crossed the Atlantic Ocean. Also, the time was difficult because two passengers and crewman died.
Then, the Pilgrims arrived in North America. First that, a baby boy was born. Later, they named him oceanus. Also, the Pilgrims started a new town, Playmouth. Besides that, the first winter was very hard.
Not only the Natives helped the Pilgrims grow crops, but also the harvest was great. Finally, the Natives and the Pilgrims celebrated with a feast.
Hi Karen!!!! Your work was ALMOST perfect!!!! =D Just check out the following mistakes and CORRECT THEM please ;) :
ResponderEliminar1. Later, they named HIM Oceanus (whom did they name? You need to add
first that a baby boy was born. That information is missing :P )
2. Not only the Natives helped the Pilgrims grow crops, but also the harvest was great. (perfect structure, just you need less commas ;) )
Ok :D
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